| "From street life to sweet life....sorta of" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 17:06 CDT
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Good update! New chapter soon, riiiight?
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2010 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. I really like all the characters in this one. It is nice to see Kagome as a bad ass. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they arrived to where kagome in time to see her fight... she was doing fine... until they had to help her with her leg... at least they got the file... but looks like naraku will be planning something against kagome?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2009 15:00 CST
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I love the story so far, but I was wandering, do you have a beta? In other words an editor, I've noticed quite a few mistakes- like Hakou (it's 'Hakaku' =]) E-mail me if you're interested! =] Keep going with the story, it's so different, I love it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome just got fed up with everyone... looks like she has started the attack against naraku... and inuyasha & the others are on their way to help... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome sure made an entrance... like how she's strong-willed... lecturing everyone in the end of the chapter... and she has cool powers... what will the reaction of the others be to what kagome said... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kags-sesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I lov the story please update soon
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Reviewed By: PrincessoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kagome should have silver hair with plack streaks down to her knees, a silver star with black outline, and 2 silver stripes with black outlines on her cheeks. She should also have grown taller. not quite as tall as inuyasha though. maybe 5'9". Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 05:01 CDT
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dude! this is so brilliant! but how is Fluffy-sama gonna get Kagome to hold S'ounga? now that is something i wanna see! please update soon! and i wanna see Kagome and Fluffy-sama Spar. ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: animelover23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 08:45 CDT
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Oh boy, another chapter! Inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship seems to be developing quickly (not that I'm complaining). Will Kikyo enter the story while Inuyasha is in Colorado? Thanks for updating. And as always, please udate again soon.
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Reviewed By: animelover23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 21:23 CDT
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I like this story so far. Interesting concept and twist to the characters, though to me Sesshomaru seems a too nice. I can't say anything about your grammer simply because I'm also in high school. Anyway, please keep up this story.
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