| "My ninja way" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 12:53 CDT
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Nice story! I really like the way have taken the time to keep the characters themselves, keeping the personalities but still altering a few things to fit in. The story could use a bit help on the grammar, but for the most part I like it. Shino has always been one of my favorite characters, mostly because I am one of the only girls my age who loves insects. o.0 Whatev. Great story, and.... Magami commands you to update!
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Reviewed By: sakura hater On: December 26, 2007 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its so good! at first it was funny but later it was funnier and shino rocks good jjob!
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Title: Sean
Reviewed By: Sptcrt2000 On: November 11, 2007 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man bri, you did a realy good job on your story.. I really liked it and how it went with Marie.. Cant wait for the other chapters to read them.. Good luck!! ~~Sean~~
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: kate222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is REALLY good! I like Shino alot, so it's nice to see something on him. You did an awesome job, LadyAmazon. Keep going with it!
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Reviewed By: songo714 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 16:56 CDT
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ELLO!ok this is really yer lil demon sept the site was gay and banned me for no reason so now this is my new account but i probibly won't be on as much tho,but i have an idea could u post this on fanfiction.net??cuz i have an account there and that site is so much easier!anyway please update soon!^_________^
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: AntiNaruxHinaXP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story but try to work on your grammar a bit more.
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol (=^_____^=) hahahaha shino was like =O.O=...not that he was complaining!XDDDDDDD
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awsome new chappy!^_^ update soon ^_~
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Title: OCs
Reviewed By: Ghostreader_Meep On: August 16, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like your story! You need some OCs? Alrighty then! ^_^ Name:Renji Bakakami (XP baka=idiot,kami=god!) Age:28 Gender:Male Picture: http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u197/WakaLaka_Star/Animeboy12.jpg Weapon of Choice: Senbon Kekki Genkai: Multiply (multiplys senbon number by 10) Personality: Renji's quiet and likes to keep to himself. Only speaks when he has to, and is often cold. History: Unknown Family: None Name:Youko Yuki (Yuki=snow...I think) Age:32 Gender:Female Picture: http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u219/anime_master_1007/dxdfxfdxdfs.jpg Weapon of Choice:Katana Kekki Genkai:Icy Blast (Attacks foe with an exploding ball of ice) Personality: Sarcastic and slightly hyper, Youko is a ball of fun. It's somtimes a wonder why she's even in the group of assasins! She likes to play with her foes before killing them; and always has something to say! Best decribed as the female version of Naruto! Personality wise. anyway. History: She was kicked out of her clan for attempting to learn the forbidden jutsus of her clan. She became a missing nin at the age of 16 and was always traveling/on the run. Evenually she joined the group of assasins that she'll still with today. Family: Her clan, but she considers herself an orphan. Hope you like them! ^_^
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
8D u dedicated it to me?!?!*hugs*yer so nice :')*gets pumped for next chapter*CHA!
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Reviewed By: busheybrow1113 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool update soon please
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Title: LadyAmazon
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks yer lil demon! i'll make the next chapter for you for being my first review!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yaaaa!i like it! please update soon @_@ hehehe bye-byes
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