| "Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:00 CDT
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ai yai yai. all of these heoes turning evil! what r u thinking? well, this will be fun to use in eternity wars, if i actually get some time to work on it!! well good luck! and when r u going to update darkness moon
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Title: One more thing
Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 21:36 CDT
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One more thing. Myotismon's attack is Grisly Wing not Grizzly Nightmare.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 21:33 CDT
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Things just went from bad to worse. Also I say that Naruto takes out one of Beryl's Generals eventually. Plus how is Sasuke going to get the Mangekyo? Because the only way to obtain it is to kill your best friend.
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:23 CDT
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Yes! You have finally updated! I'm finally glad that you updated this story! Things have gone worse for our heroes and heroines, when Inuyasha is brainwased by Dartz and the Orichalcos and bashes his sister and beloved, as well as Koga, that's got to hurt his pride, since he lost so easily but a 'dog' or 'half-breed'. Melody is a Sailor Scout and Davis, Kagome, and Serena have gone into deep darkness. I hope that you'll update more and I understand that you had mid-terms to get ready for!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 23:17 CST
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So exactly how is Sasuke going to get the Mangekyo? Also since he is going to get it he is going to have to take Itachi's eyes to prevent the blindness. Unless you figure out a way around that. Something tells me that Beryl is going to want the power of So'unga. Seeing as how it is a demonic sword. Also something tells me that Kyubi hates the Leviathan. Plus why haven't added in Kyubi meeting with Naruto to tell of its history with the Light of Destruction? Because I thought you said that that was going to happen soon. Plus it will be interesting to see Prince Arashi and Prince Madara tear through Beryl's youma. Finally when will we see Sailor Andromeda again?
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 20:42 CST
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Oh wowiie wowo wow!!!! That was absolutely stunning Gallantmon!!!! No seriously!!!! ANd now with the new enemies and such coming up, oh I can't wait!!!! If I may ask, will you please throw the new Treasured Era Scouts in as well?
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 17:23 CST
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great great great, and i can't wait! for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 16:49 CST
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great story
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Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 14:30 CST
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Nice chapter!!! Please, update more!
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Title: Got to rush this
Reviewed By: matn90 aka Dark Side of the Moon On: February 14, 2008 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got to rush this since I hav to go to my SAT study class! GREAT BATTLE! LIKE CLASH OF THE TITANS ANIME STYLE! See more soon I hope! Later!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Matt(from ff.net) On: February 06, 2008 14:23 CST
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This was the best big battle yet!! With Sartorius out the SOL is pretty much neutered..I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see who the new dark side enemies are, especially the new ninja (something tells me it's not Orochimaru). Get the next part out fast!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:47 CST
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Great chapter. Though I have a few things to ask or say. On the So'unga's sheath shouldn't it go across Naruto's back since it is so big? Also on the Jutsu you don't have to put Ninja Art before the name of the jutsu. Also how about Naruto takes down Crowler and Bonaparte somewhere down the line. Plus perhaps the Kyubi could come before Naruto to explain the Kyubi's history with the LoD. Also you never answered my on the Amaterasu. Plus if you do have Itachi show up as a good guy the explanation you could give is that he was under the control of Madara Uchiha.
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Blue-Eyes White Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was the best chapter yet,and the fighting scenes we're awesome!Good job!Update soon!^^ BEWK
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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