| "And the Father Is..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 20:34 CDT
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I have to say that i can't what to find out who the babby's father is and see if the idots get to getter. Do you relize that you didi all the chepters sepretly after combiding them in the frist chapter? Can't what to see what happen.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 08:31 CST
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yep, it's here at 15 chapters with a lot of other stories this author has written. http://www.fanfiction.net/u/714886/JoannaKuwabara
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 08:26 CST
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this is a good story so far, i think i saw it somewhere else with a few more chapters though. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Mannery On: April 22, 2008 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a rather interesting story. Usually I hate Kuwabara, but you've somehow made me like him, and trust me that is not an easy task. Please put up the next chapter! I want to see what Koenma's reaction is!
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Reviewed By: Fire Ninja Takashi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love story! It's soo funny!
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Reviewed By: ^__^ On: February 20, 2008 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love it! DO more! DO more! (actually, you could get preggy like that...but i'm not gonna explain the details xP)
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow please update soon. I know this is gonna sound weird but did it happen when he sat on the wet tolet seat and do not laugh know in real life you can not get preggy from sitting on a tolet seat but in fanfiction world it is possible.lol lol
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