| "Rough Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent.
::steps on soapbox::
Reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT dissing.
And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives, I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy reading. |
Reviewed By: Mimi Glassforde On: December 18, 2002 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*Twitch* Didnt I just yell at you? Hentai...*Shudders* Besides, that aint rough..thats like, wussy little girlie sex. And your over use of adjectives. My english teacher told me you can never have too many adjectives... HE NEVER SAW YOUR TITLES! Really though, go write a yaoi fic, then, I will at least say, "Okey, your tolerable". for now, you suck..still. |
Reviewed By: freakloser_20 On: June 14, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
These fanfics were great! you should do some ones
about Seifer and Quistis! I think there a kickass
couple man! keep writing |
Reviewed By: Anihika Fudoh On: May 07, 2002 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
nest time don't expose the sex things to much! even it's a lemon fanfic...but if it's too much sex things it isn't good too/ if i can percentage it....why don't u try like this....romance....40%....hentai...40%...dan comedy 20%? |
Reviewed By: Lorvinther (Who shoulda signed in) On: April 05, 2002 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
*Falls on floor cracking up. Parents walk by, shake their heads sadly, and close bedroom door.* Heh, seriously though, you should continue. That was great! Never have I thought of such an intricate pair, and never had I actually thought of reading something like this till now. Fine mixture of hentai and comedy, maybe even some spiced mixture of romance deep in there...Hell! What more to say? It was great, I couldn't have thought of something like that in forever. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: animeman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this fanfic and i have to say its one of the best ive ever read. I was laughing so hard while reading this my mom had to yell at me to shut up. Keep it up hope theirs another sequel soon |
Reviewed By: DragonessEve [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfik! I was laughing away and my little bro thought I was on crack! Great job and I also read the one with Rinoa and Squall! Great job there too! I hope there will be more sequals to this! Even now I can't stop laughing!^o^ |
Reviewed By: marion On: November 28, 2001 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was very well written and in my
opinion,the best fanfic I've ever read.I never
thought of the two main characters featured
would be a couple,but I'm glad they were
written as one.The author has alot of talent and
I thought it was a cool fanfic.I hope they keep up
the good work! |
Reviewed By: Bubba Ray On: September 08, 2001 02:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, nice seeing this up here,I dont think I need to tell you again how great this is :: smokes :: wheres PS? :) |
Reviewed By: hell On: November 09, 2001 08:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story!! keep writting! |
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