| "Rough Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**Has to change panties and returns blushing** Wow.... Hot and perfect |
Reviewed By: Kelsey On: January 03, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luvvvvvvved itttttttttttt! It was a really good story ... I was cracking up... my dog who was in the room with me looked at me like I was an insane luntic or something... |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism. And I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First time I tried reviewing, it didn't post. Well, then.
Excellent work.
::steps on soapbox::
Again, reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT outright dissing. And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy writing and reading. |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 21, 2002 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent.
::steps on soapbox::
Reviews are for constructive critisism, NOT dissing.
And as to someone's complaint of the overuse of adjectives, I would like to point out that the title is taken from the words of a song.
::steps off soapbox::
Adieu and happy reading. |
Reviewed By: Mimi Glassforde On: December 18, 2002 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*Twitch* Didnt I just yell at you? Hentai...*Shudders* Besides, that aint rough..thats like, wussy little girlie sex. And your over use of adjectives. My english teacher told me you can never have too many adjectives... HE NEVER SAW YOUR TITLES! Really though, go write a yaoi fic, then, I will at least say, "Okey, your tolerable". for now, you suck..still. |
Reviewed By: freakloser_20 On: June 14, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
These fanfics were great! you should do some ones
about Seifer and Quistis! I think there a kickass
couple man! keep writing |
Reviewed By: Anihika Fudoh On: May 07, 2002 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
nest time don't expose the sex things to much! even it's a lemon fanfic...but if it's too much sex things it isn't good too/ if i can percentage it....why don't u try like this....romance....40%....hentai...40%...dan comedy 20%? |
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