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"The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ]
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 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems there's a lot of waiting going on... everyone will eventually meet at some point... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2007 00:01 CDT
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can you believe that i am out of words? i have been typing and deleting for the past hour. i wanted to mention the interactions, perceptions and the behavior of the players. i wanted to mention your descriptions and quiet observations, good stuff but i was going to try to be witty and relevant but my brain broke and the tape isn't sticking. =/ i will write a better review next time... (there is no 'try', only 'do'~ yoda, star wars, the empire strikes back) ~ always a pleasure, ginny
 Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2007 23:12 CDT
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I just realized that I missed your last couple of updates. I started reading this chapter and went - "Huh?" Sorry, been a busy girl. Anyway, this is getting very interesting and I'm amazed at how this is coming together. It's like standing a few feet away from an incomplete puzzle, and every chapter places a few fascinating little pieces, but the total image is still hidden. The plot is engrossing and progressing nicely, yet you've held enough back to keep your reader very very curious. All I can say is - wow.
 Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2007 22:06 CDT
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Okay... my mind is racing with so many deities and Buddhist's Lords!! I'm wondering what you have in store for this Saicho guy... is he going to honour his name or is he the young version of the lord to become. Mmmm... what are you knitting? Nice, short but nice. Keep going! Thanks for the update!!!!
 Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2007 08:51 CDT
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hey, splendid writing, i love it! Love the pieces of wisdom spread about too. So keep up the good work and please update soon! :)
 Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2007 02:11 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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It's 4 in the morning, have to go to bed... for 2 hours... just woke up and found your update... have to read it!!! Nice chapter!!! You are slipping some information... a bit... but it's there. Oh! my Tsukikage is there too!!! She is a spirit fox... so she is a white fox. Mmmm love all this foxy thing! So soon they are all going to gather together. It would make Inuyasha and Kagome feel a bit more comfortable. I think. But, still, too many questions to be answered. We'll see. Loved the chapter and loved how it's flowing!! You are a skillful and magnificent writer my friend!! Good job, keep going!!! And thank you for the update!!!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2007 22:21 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least everyone is coming close to meeting now... wonder what happens when they all meet... how will everything go... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2007 11:06 CDT
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shippo's turn? . . . i hope you don't mind but i recommended this story to the 'inuyasha fan guild'. i found it to be a good place to find links to interesting well written stories and this fic fit the criteria... a first step to a possible nomination and maybe even an award, best wishes ~ thank you, ginny
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2007 01:56 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... but still wondering why everyone is being drawn to the same place... and what their connections will be... what roles will they play... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
 Title: Here too!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 03, 2007 17:16 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm switching sites looking for the update! LOL. Eager to know what's going on and something is coming... When are they going to meet? Who is Shippo going after? Kuko? The Lady Fox? Although I'm not a fan of Shippo, it's sweet that he finds himself looking for his kin, remembering his home, his parents. Like how you brought up the memory of smells something we share with youkai. Smells that feel like Deja-vus.... rambling again. Now it is like an open page, feel like it will take a chapter or a couple to find more answers, maybe not. I think that, as we are, they are at the edge of their nerves! Like told you before, loved it... and the poems, WOW. Nice chapter, keep going and thank you for the update.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2007 23:36 CDT
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the ripples? was that when kagome broke the jewel? then again the jomei was starting her cult well before the jewel was broken... like everyone is having night terrors, not pleasant dreams. . . (hide, i just had a thought!) if he was doing a deity a favor by killing youkai why did the deity create them in the first place, even mosquitoes have a purpose (damned if i know what it is but they have a purpose). i waited until i finished reading the other stories i had on alert, i saved the best for last. ~ ciao! ginny
 Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2007 06:47 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You have me on the edge... and turned into a tao's and zen's frog! LOL. Back to the chapter, everything is there and sthg. is going to happen. The testing... who is 'she' with so many regrets? I can imagine but not sure... Good to see that, although they still keep their animosity the brothers are growing up, maybe sthg that they must prove capable of to achieve as well as Sesshomaru's acceptance or tolerance of ningen... WOW. Too many things to think about... the testing is coming... I think. >.o Nice chapter! Thank you so much for the update!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2007 05:41 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... it seems that whatever or whoever it is - is drawing everyone to rinji or the same area... what for... what's the reason behind all of it... wonder when they'll all meet... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2007 11:05 CDT
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Wow, you've got kamis coming out of the woodwork! This last chapter gave me a little thrill chill down my spine. I keep looking over my shoulder when I read this, expecting to see some glowing entity with a beatific smile. Geez, I gotta quit drinking. Gotta say, you're inspiring my imagination. Great work.
 Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2007 17:27 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Everything is interweaving, the dreams and its protagonists… the different situations each of them is going through -by dreams or reality- is preparing them for the outcome meeting, and you are the weaver. The chapter is very deep with its meanings and innuendos, at the same time, it left -sort of- up to the protagonists to find the meaning in it. BTW, the lady fox is sort of calling each of our gang members to be part of what's developing… waiting to know more about her, is intriguing… who is or was she o who really is she… The first noble truth… they are living it, they are dreaming it… You have the ability to put us there as a ghost and sharing what they are going through. It's beautiful and complicated… thrilling and nurturing… It's getting better and better, really. Thank you so much! Mage
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