| "The Evil in Men's Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... everything is getting complicated... i agree with you when kagome said that it was easier to know who was good & bad when they were still against naraku... now it just seems confusing... hope things will become clearer once everyone reaches their destination... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 17:58 CDT
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they're not leaving anyone out are they? a premonition or a warning perhaps? . . . i have been developing an intimate relationship with google concerning japanese deities. a real japanese theological education between this and demonlordlover's 'a sentinel mother'. . . wondering where the warrior monks cam from and is it okay that they were killed? jomei is going to need a maillot to the head if he doesn't fall asleep soon. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... what did kagome's dream mean... who was it calling to her... when will sang & miroku's group meet up with inuyasha & kagome's group... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Just started reading it at your journal...
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 01:07 CDT
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then there was a bit on my PC... your update at MM. Wow! What a night they are having! Must tell you that I'm learning a lot about swormandship styles and Japan's Kamis! Each time someting pops up I must go to google to know the meaning behind the Kami presence or whatever, not that I get a clue about it but it's very interesting. LOL. This story is like reading a 'thrill', clueless about what is going to happen but so trapped in its labyrinths that can't stop reading it. Thank you so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 09:02 CDT
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Oooh, the plot thickens. Loved the chrysanthemum story. Very charming - maybe a sneaky little parallel about Sesshomaru's relationship with Rin? So curious about the youkai appearing to Kagome in dreamyland. I've always wondered what Sesshomaru eats since he doesn't like ningen food. Is there some sort of youkai pate out there? Really nice chapter & great story!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 20:10 CDT
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*see tapestry analogy in a previous review* . . . amazing! i love this ride, and yes it seems like a ride, the lulling sway and momentum of the vehicle, breathtaking scenery, interesting company! a wonderful fantasy tale artfully told (even the scary parts). . . i'm thinking i am going to run out out of pertinent and complimentary things to say about this story without sounding redundant before it's finished so don't be surprised when all you get from me is a review that only says:"good stuff!". . . everyone will go off into their own little dream adventure, learning their individual purpose, lessons, goals? . . . the way you present this tale intrigues and captivates. the reader wants, needs more. we are grateful that you update frequently so we don't have to hurt too long for our next fix. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, love the way you make me think things over, the way your story nutures us. The way you mix religion and hand human nature with mythology and fantasy, the usage of 'dreams' a form of communicating messages or premonitions of what could happen. Beautiful and sweet scene with Rin and Hatuzo (sp), nice story. Thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where you started and where you are going. i can't wait to see how you develop the relationships.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are still a bit confusing... everyone seems to have different agendas... who is really the bad guy here again... how will kagome be able to help... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... wonder what happens when everyone reaches Rinji... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The more I read this, the more I like it. Intriguing plot, nice build up, and it stimulates us morons into trying to use our brain cells. There are plenty of fun fics out there, a slightly lessor number of "good" ones, an only a few that challenge the reader. I think yours is one of them. Keep up the good work. Oh, please don't take my Spelling & Grammar rating too hard. I know I butcher the punctuations from time to time, but it's obvious yours are only typos.
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Title: We'll meet at Rinji...
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 16:58 CDT
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It seems like they are going to encounter at this Kami's place. Mmmm... fox everywhere, even Miroku dreamt one. So Jomei is been prepared in some way for this... intriguing. I was expecting Inuyasha to be taught a few 'regal' movements by his uncle, there is always time for get to know each other. Of course, Inuyasha will be reluntant but think that in the end he will get closer to Teijo. Would love to know what are you knitting on that mind of yours! Waiting for next chapter! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 13:47 CDT
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happy healthy reward and encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolately goodness! ~#~ ::chocolate coma:: 12 oz silken tofu + 12 oz melted chocolate chips ^ whipped to a fluffy froth - refrigerate till cold ~ yummy! . . . i guess the family members won't become much closer right away but they aren't killing each other anymore. . . i'm assuming all will find some kind of enlightenment on their upcoming journey and i am intrigued as to what that will entail. ~a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 15:15 CDT
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one hopes the dreams/memories are for softening the heart and opening the mind. one would have to live as another for more than a few hours to truly understand they aren't much different as well as completely unique. . . sesshoumaru's attitude change concerning his brother is something that may take a bit longer in canon but i wouldn't be surprised when it does happen. . . too bad yasha and fluffy can't just tell the 'jomei' that they've been to 'hell' and 'land of the dead' and it is a place that there is no distinction between youkai or human. . . a wonderful story, keep it up. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Something is out there..
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 11:22 CDT
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Nice one. Adorable I/K relationship, they clearly grew up and their new status is showed bit by bit at each chap. Love it! Benzaiten is the Kami of the Ku...'s hand and Nyoko is a soul in the stone or the soul of the stone...? You got me there. ;) Jomei's dreams are turning into nightmares, nice touch to make him see his sister's ordeal through Mareo's eyes and the brutality of the 'good' guys, although don't think he would see it as brutality but punishment and part of his believes' 'logic', killing as redemption for those souls. Mmmm food for thought... Keep going!!! Great chap.!
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