| "together in harmany" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sessy's little secret On: October 11, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well even though there is only 2 chapters I really like what I see. I like how they didn't remember her in the first place. I also like how Inuyasha was being all perverted funny. I like that kind of funny. Anyway keep up the good work> Please update soon! I am dying to read the rest of this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, A spellcheck would be in order... I haven't even read the story yet and I counted about 15 mistakes. Even the title is wrong... it is 'harmOny'. This may be a good story, but it is impossible to read. Use the spellcheck in Word - it'll help you out.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh c'mon! i cant belive you left it here! plz continue! i want to see sesshomaru seduce kagome!!!!!!!!! i really like the story but your grammar is off. if you want i can send you messages on whats wrong with it. but you have to continue first!!!
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