Title: wow
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great pairing, you just have to write a multi chapter fic about these two as you have set the story up so nicely by Neji describing just what he thought of Sakura before he actually accepted her as a good friend. Scarey strength, scarey temper, etc, it would be great to have them do a mission together where they were antagonists at first but they both become grudingly respectful of each other and then put into situations where they each save each others lives and the bond is formed. Especially since he is anbu and she is an excellent med nin the chances of this happening on missions might be quite high. Please consider this suggestion as you could really pull if off with your excellent insightfulness with the characters.
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