| "Tied With A Bow" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: hazard2self On: December 19, 2007 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Amazing. Threesomes seem like a pain in the ass(not the good kind Iruka will have either)most of the time because the third person just kinda floats there while the other two go at it but everyone was nice and involved in your peice. Once again, good job!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mary, holy mother of god, that was so fucking intense! soooo goood please keep on writing like that!!!!!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
holy mother of god i love you. holy crap. -goes to drown in an extremely cold bath- i think this is probably your best lemon yet.
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Reviewed By: Vescas On: August 13, 2007 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYS!!! Oh god, but that was HOT!!
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