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| "Water" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Real Emotion On: January 23, 2008 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
U did really good on this. I usually don't even read axel/roxas but this caught my attention. very good job. ;) ur style of writing is accurate. It wasn't long but short and sweet! once again GREAT! plz review my newest, i think you might like! it's called "rain and secrets/and two became one. good day to you . peace
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it depressing that I continually reread this. I seriously need alife not related to anime/games/yaoi. =/ Maybe I'm just waiting for another of your works...... They truly ARE... erm... lovely. xD I had told my friend about this fiction yesterday and was like, "I want to read it again!" So that's also why I'm reading it... Plus, I don't think I gave you a 1-10 rating on any of that stuff, and I'd enjoy trying to sound like a pro. B)
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, I'm slow. XD I was like, "How's 8/13 AxelRoxas day?" Then I looked at it again and I was like, "oooohh.... Axel's Number 8 and Roxas is Number 13!" XP Apparently my birthday gave me a couple IQ points. Hehe... 8/13 is a holiday now! XP Happy Belated Axel/Roxas day!
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_~ The 15th is my birthday, and porn is such a great gift (only in a fanfic, though XD) Thanks for writing this, and I loved the whole camera thing. Also, about the little rainbows... Wvwey time a rainbow appears, God is having a gay moment... I think God read your story, or made you write that. XP And yay! seme!Axel and uke!Roxas! Too bad it's only today. XP Axel is hot when he's seme.... but still, seme Roxas is okay... XP Nice writing, as always!
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