| "Torn Between Two Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Starshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more you tell about Kase in this story, the more I want to whack him upside the butt with the sharp end of a katana. ::nods:: A wonderful way to end this particular section - which is also keeping me hanging on a cliff to see the rest of it!
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Title: From Carter who hasn't signed on yet
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've already told you how much I've liked this story. It feels so good to read about the guys again, especially hot stuff like this. And of course, the angst. It's all good. Anyway, I loved this debut and can't wait to see what else you have in store. ~CT
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Title: Canoodling in the Koneko
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Yohji is showing that he's observant, in the beginning there. Hopefully he is catching the sadness and defeat in Ken's laugh. Can I just say I'm kind of sad for Ken? Not sorry for, that's not right because he could find out what he wants by asking. But I feel sad for him because Kase messed him up so bad that he's afraid to ask. I do love Yohji, he noticed, with luck once the physical situation is settled he'll try to find out what it is that is making Ken so sad. Yes I really do love Yohji, Ken doesn't really know it yet but he such a lucky guy. Though I image Yohji will say it's the other way around, and be right too. Okay Yohji obviously looses important brain functions after sex. -_- Again I wish there was a way for Kase to be brought back just so Yohji and Aya could make him very sorry. You know I love your muses they are awesome and I hope they continue to inspire you for years to come. And you know I have no fear of your epics, the longer the better I say. ^________^
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Reviewed By: Starshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::purrs:: Mmmm! I never realized how much I have been perishing for a good story until I started reading this one. The fact that I actually had monsoon rains pelting the house just added to the "ambiance" of the piece...I could see this so vividly in my mind, I'm like to dream of the lads tonight! Well done!
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Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah one thought leading to another Ken's in trouble. LOL You can see Yohji's enfluence a bit here that he is even considering doing anything while watching the shop. That blond bombshell may not be the total playboy he likes to make himself out to be, but that's definitely his devil may care attitude peeking out of Kenken. The fact that he is getting jealous of the fangirls for boy of his guys is hilarious. He should realize he's totally lost right there. ;p I know how you've handled the threesome in other stories. :-) And I know how I see the other two, but I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle the Yohji/Aya situation in this story. Holy Hannah... you'll forgive me if my mind goes blank for awhile right? "Go away on it's own." LOL That sounds like Yohji and it's nice to see that he's a bit jealous. I love the way you described his walk, cats big and small are so graceful and Yohji is definitely graceful. Then again I think Ken is also, being an athlete it just seems more reasonable than him being clumsy the way a lot of people portray him. Okay I don't know if I like the idea that Aya's being rough and Ken is just taking it. Okay can I wish Kase back so that Yohji and Aya can slice him to ribbons for Ken?
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: nightwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT's very good! lol ken, angst. i can't even spell that. i like it keep writing! *wondering* what are you going to do about ur other stories *coughneturalterritorycough*
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Reviewed By: Rubious2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 09:42 CDT
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Yay! More angst from Melpomene and Llama. You've got Kenken's melancholiness nailed. Oooh. Foreboding too.
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Title: Laundry Room Liason
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was awesome! Even more with this one I felt like I was standing in a corner of the room watching the scene play out. I could see it all as I was reading. Ken's rage at himself and turning to the work of cleaning mission clothes instead of resting or helping with the others was so Ken. And I really like the way you are building us an image of the Koneko. It will allow us to follow the boys through the building as we read. We can imagine most of it with the details you are giving for the rest. Ken and Aya were always the once who were less willing to share their emotions. But I can see Ken accepting the chance to vent his the way he did. The soap in the eye thing, that is so easy to do. I handle my eyes so much that I watch every little thing I touch and put on just to avoid Ken's situation and still get caught sometimes. Especially when emotions are running high like that. You moved really smoothly through their first time giving us just enough to visualize their first time and easing us in. It was awesome!
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Title: A Melancholy Afternoon
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay you know my views on the darn rating system when it comes to you so you know why the first three got bipassed. Now the story. Wow Melancholy is the word for Ken's view on the day. But for an outdoors guy who'd rather be out playing soccer that is understandable. I really had to chuckly at his thoughts on the raindrop splatters though! ~grin~ I can soooo relate to wandering around a shop or office trying to find something... anything that needs doing on a slow day and realizing it's all been done. It can just make the day so much worse when you are bored and have stuff on your mind you'd rather not think about. I really enjoy the way you portray Ken. All of the guys are sensitive in one way or another, but Ken is the one I can really see angsting over wanting one or the other of the relationships to mean more. I wouldn't want to be him trying to choose though. And damn that Aya for running off with the best bathroom and not sharing. Living up to his cold hearted jerk status there. LOL I take it that necrophiliac rapist is the character they run into later with violent results and bloodshed. But then it's pretty easy to imagine it you giftwrapped it nicely. ;p The information you put together to package the Japanese killer as an almost copycat was awesome. I love the detail. The idea that the boys got the request for flowers must have been hard. I'm wondering if Omi might have known the person. And I can't wait to see who the mysterious lover is though I have strong assumptions. hehe Poor Ken he's got some more hard thinking and some even more difficult conversations coming soon. Neither of the other two are going to be readily cooperative I imagine as they'll have other things on their minds.
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