| "Everlasting" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: A fan of Deidara On: December 02, 2007 09:07 CST
Comment/Review:
It is not clearly mentioned, but it seems that in this fiction Tobi caused Deidara to lose a part of his memory about Sasori? Somehow it is a base act - erasing someone's importance in another's heart without the latter's permission...this is robbery. Yet the base and hurtful act at the same time may do Deidara good. This makes this fiction sad. The ending...sorrowful for the audience to read. This fiction of yours is nice. Hope you will continue writing Deidara fiction in the future. Thank you.
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Title: Sorry!
Reviewed By: Volunteer11 On: August 28, 2007 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gak! Sorry, project-chan! ppl, project 0506 did NOT write that last comment about her own story. I did while accidentally signed in to her profile. I doubt it that for such a good writer she could be that vain, lol! ;P
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Reviewed By: Project 0506 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good character understanding. I haven't found a grammatical error in one of your pieces yet! What I find really fascinating is the descriptions. Bien cuit!
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