Reviewed By:dragoon-tyjet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 01:40 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You have a great start going here. I liked how you didn't leave Arashi dead. I also liked how you linked Naruto to the rest of the family, and their reunion. Reading the part when Naruto left would make most people want to cry...so way to go on that as well. Keep it up I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewed By:sgamefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 16:16 CDT Comment/Review: nice ffanfic cant wait for the next chapter i love narusaku pairing keep it up