| "Behind Blue Eyes: Seto's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, people are still reading. I do have a couple of complaints though. First, you skipped the Seto equivalent of chapter 16, Stolen, and posted chapter 18, Night Out, twice. Second, for chapter 19, Terrifying Routine, you promised a note telling us where we could go to read the more adult version. I didn't see it, but I don't exactly have the best eyesight either. I'm going to assume that you will continue these fics (and therefore, am keeping them in my bookmarks) because the original is already 3 chapters ahead of this one. Please don't disappoint me.
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Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you had me in tears, I love the way your portraying Seto and Joey and quiet frankly can't wait for someone to kill Saki, I have thoroughly enjoyed your two part series and I will be reading you. HS
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Reviewed By: ash2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait till you write more.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: February 04, 2008 02:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you accidentally posted "Night Out" twice, and forgot "Stolen" :(
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Reviewed By: i don't have a mm account On: December 19, 2007 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love this story...or these stories. Maybe I'm just a Seto uke fanatic or something, but this story is probably one of the best Seto uke ones I've ever read. It's also so interesting that you split it up into POVs of the different characters. I've enjoyed every moment of reading this story. Well, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: melodyz07 On: December 19, 2007 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This Saki is crazy!!!!!! Seto has done that without fighting to save Katsuya's life (arrrghhh...that's more than sweet)... Katsuya will become crazy from madness if he knows about that. Seto is just great!!!!(He's so perfect^^) And by the way, you were afraid from the lemon but I found that it was very well-written for a first lemon. And besides it has a really special touch because it was written from Seto's eyes. Good Job^^ Thank you for this beautiful chapter.
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 02:38 CDT
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please update! I'm so excited for the next chapter! I can't wait to see how Seto reacts to alcohol! You are doing a wonderful job and I'm eager to read more!
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