| "The Beyblade Bedroom Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Aretsu On: August 01, 2011 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved your story I give everything a 10! Please continue writing you have to! Don't leave a hentai beyblade fan waiting! Oh and more KaixRay action plz! |
Title: D-Reaper Originalle Undercover
Reviewed By: iqvada On: January 23, 2008 07:58 EST
Comment/Review:
Yay!! U wrote back!… ^________^ btw ur doing wonders 4 my ego u knw!… I guess I've met another pervert at last ^-^;;;… anyways with tat statement! U kicked my curiosity and my pervy-instinct in the ass and told it 2 wait!… now I really really wanna read the pervy stuff tat fogged ur mind all morning!… eagerly waiting hope 2 c ur update soon…. =P!………. Oh and btw there is no reason 4 u 2 thank me caz it has been my pleasure! XD….. cya soon!
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Title: iqvada!!! I
Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle Undercover(not logged in) On: January 22, 2008 12:52 EST
Comment/Review:
Iqvada, thank you so much! I feel like I'm writing this smut just for you- and I'm ok with that... As long as I'm keeping one pervert happy, I'm in a gleeful bliss. I really do appreciate the feedback- it's the only thing that keeps me going. And don't worry about the lemon- I actually couldn't get my lemon scene out of my head this morning. It's coming in due time. *snap snap* Hey, other readers! Follow the example this wonderful person is setting and throw this starving artist a bone!
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Reviewed By: iqvada On: January 20, 2008 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"HOT", "SMEXY", "DELICIOUS", "A COMPLETE TURN ON"! choose any dude caz u earned it XD ... btw another perfect score!... u knw im still waiting 4 the lemon... and guess wat ma patience's growing thin! ^^;; ray and kai 2gether im guessing tat thr will be some UNINTERUPTED action,... anyways tyson's such a slut!... (hope ur not offended by the wordS)... but poor thing having 2 go home with a hard-on! :D... BTW Kenny CAN BE SOOOO ADORABLE SOMETIMES... BUT NO ONE CAN COMPARE 2 KAI NOW CAN THEY... XDD ...laters! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: iqvada On: December 22, 2007 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thr u fnally updated ^^ anyways i loved it... hehe it was ALMOST a complete turn on. im saying ALMOST caz i wanna lemon 4m u XD... hopefully ill c it soon (keeps her fingers crossed) =) anyways kinky max!, pervy tyson,... wat more can i want?.... COUGH.uke-kai.COUGH ^____^;;;; lol anyways pllllllz update soon laterz :D btw uke-kai rulez... O.o"
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Title: vampirelover
Reviewed By: vampirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plozzzzz centinu!!!!i'm a big yaoi fan!!!this aounds great plz plz plz update sooon!
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Reviewed By: Iced coffe On: September 07, 2007 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool beans, I really liked reading this. Overall the writing was good. But the idea is one of the best I've seen. Please update, cause it's just awfull to leave it there and never come back....And or take forever to come back.
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Reviewed By: iqvada On: August 29, 2007 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your work was really really good i loved it. but i have a small request plz plz make kai uke *pout* pwease :D i like the way u've kept him in character its really good plz update this fic don't leave me hanging my perveted mind wants 2 read further :D lolz
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Reviewed By: don'thatem3cazuain'tm3 On: August 29, 2007 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG plzzzzzzz continue writting and would really really really like it if you would make kai uke caz in the orginal manga and japaness version kai is the second youngest i.e he is the youngest after kenny. but tat doesn't at all mean that u should make him out of character he's perfect the way he is :D i really love ur style of writing and the idea....... er ok i admitt i'm am extremly perveted.... so anywaz plz don't abbandon this idea
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