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| "OOPS!--Lina's Diary" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shadowkatz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
HELL!!!! Where did your e-mail go?!?! HUH!?!?!?! How the HELL am I supposed to bitch at you when you don't put up your e-mail on your bio?!?! Well, I'll jsut have to FLAME your fic because I can't find your e-mail. Be happy I didn't check the reviews on my story before. First of all, the comment about the reviews, this story was not even MEANT to go on mediaminer.org, it was meant for fanfiction.net. At THAT website, it's extremely easy to get a large abundance of reviews in the first day or so. For example, by the end of the first week my story was out, I had more than 30 reviews!!! It's not MY fault that no one likes YOUR stories enough to review them enough!! Though you MIGHT get more reviews if you put your stories on fanfiction.net, though I doubt it if you keep on flaming people like that. If you just love flaming people, not on the quality of their stories, but how many F***ING reviews they have then, and I quote, "that kinda sickens me." I will like hell ask for as many reviews as I want. I will most likely put up the chapters more quickly than the reviews number of reviews HERE because no one ever goes to mediaminer.org. DAMN IT!!!!!! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM!?!?!?! THEY'RE JUST A NUMBER OF REVIEWS!!! I'd understand it if the flame was about how horrible my story was and that my grammer was off or something like that, but they're JUST reviews!!!! AND!!!!!!! Meilin is NOT going to be a good person. From my reviews before, Meilin will have a VERY minor part, and be a complete bitch!! Also, a HUGE attribute to that fact is that I'l make Meilin a bitch just to spite YOU!!! Oh, and just to add a touch of irony, "I'm sorry this was a flame, but that is one of my pet peeves and it REALLY made me mad." (I fixed your horrid grammer mistakes and your horrible sentence structure) Sound familiar?!?! This is EXACTLY what you put to end your review on my story! To complete my whole flame, please note that the words are RED, as in FLAME!!!!!!!! I SERIOUSLY wish I could do more that just waste a whole bunch of space and hopefully lag up your comp, but obviously I can't, so let this be a warning, think before you flame!!!! | Reviewed By: Random Queen On: June 28, 2002 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Write more H/L romances. They just make the BEST couple. Personally (heh) if I didn't think they made such a good couple I'd like him, too. I just love it. PLEAZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! TUrn it into a HUGE romance where they're all makin out and stuff. Wanna know y I'm obsessing ovr this? A lot of the H/L stories out there don't go into things very well in my PoV. Okay, u basically get what I'm saying: WRITE MORE. And u just had to throw in the WORST Britney Spears song, didn't tcha? |
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