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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My word that Watch is an obsession for Inu! I love the realism that you put in here with Inu tracking down the scent and losing it then finding it again. You gave him an imperfection and I cheer you! Typical Inuyasha to overreact (he needs some serious Anger Management Skills) and We'll probably see Kagome typically overreact later on. Interesting how Kagome got him back with the watch by acting like a little kid.. they do bring out the kid in each other don't they! Great story! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: future author On: August 29, 2007 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon and keep up the excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 21:20 CDT
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haha oh my...poor kagome. interesting storyline. can't wait for more =)
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 13:27 CDT
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I like your story I think is realy good I hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yes the story is progessing very nicely! I wonder why that "hunter" was in the woods at night by himself... Maybe illegal shooting? I do like how you have gotten Kagome at the hospital and her finding the pocket watch! Inuyasha is quite miffed and I can see the baka/wench fight coming up! Miroku a doctor? Heh.. he'll have a great excuse for the unwanted touching/harrassing of women. Descriptions are all very good and the details very very good as well! The story is flowing at a nice pace, not too fast and not too slow! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: August 22, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh very good story so far!! keep up the great work and update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U made this version more interesting then the other one, so I do like it more then the other one. Plz carry on and update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes.. I found the start of this version better. It explained the wound and reason for going into town better. I do like this! can't wait to read more! I love the way you write!
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