| "Hiei's loss, Hiei's gain" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 19:19 CST
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Aha! Action! Interesting split for the two groups, -- I definitely wasn't expecting them to shape up the way they did. I'm feeling quite sorry for Hiei, with his "help." Kuwabara without his spirit energy and Inuyasha with his attitude. LOL!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 00:54 CDT
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Wow! You're cranking this story right out. So, Hiei finally joined them, but will be going off on his own again to retrieve the book. They have to retrieve these artifacts before they can bring the others from the Feudal Era before they can go after Naraku? Whew! They're going to be busy. LOL!! Looking forward to watching it unfold some more!
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Reviewed By: xouldemon On: October 11, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Please update soon!! This story is excellent!!
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 14:16 CDT
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava (not logged in) On: September 03, 2007 19:59 CDT Rating(s): Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: interesting... i'll be waiting for updates!
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 14:15 CDT
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 03:19 CDT Comment/Review: Very interesting! Naraku grabbed Yukina. So, is he thinking Hiei will help him against Inuyasha and Kagome, et.al.? And, boy, I sure am hoping that Hiei's "Gain" is Kagome!!! Loved your description of Naraku. I hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: alissa On: October 09, 2007 01:34 CDT
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i really like the story and i hope you keep writing it!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 01:41 CDT
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Thank you so much for sending Kagome to get Inuyasha! That's EXACTLY what anyone with half a brain would do. I'm sure I reveiewed the previous chapters of this, -- maybe on another site? No, I got the alert here. Anyway, I am still hoping Kagome will prove to be Hiei's gain in this. I liked the way he confronted Yusuke and then left. So, Kagome followed the saimyoushou and the guys instead of the jewel shard she sensed, huh? Will she take inu there BEFORE going to Genkai's? This is looking good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 12:55 CDT
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oooooooooWWWWWWWWWWW......TALK ABOUT THE PIRO TECHNICKS.....Its hard to say after a single chapter but I thinkyou could turn this in to a realy great story...XD...I hope you do....NYUKA
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