| "Threatened" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Beautiful story. That was a magnificent achievement for a self proclaimed first time writer. I admit that while it has dificulties fitting in the timeline that is not a drawback, as in truth it could be placed an many oportunities and still bear the same impact. It was an excellent story and with works like this I do hope that there will be others. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: deckman1063 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done! A good effort for a "first-timer". The story was nicely subtle, and still very direct at the same time. No clue where it might fit in the canon, but that is probably irrelevant. I look forward to seeing more from you if this is your first attempt.
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