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| "Pure Light" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm going to keep this short, but to the point! I've just read your chapter 5 and I think it is quite good. The Sailor Scouts have met, the groups learns about their adventures, and now, Inuyasha's and Kagome's friends from the Feudal Era have arrived! And by the way, I would like for Inuyasha and Kagome to be together if you don't mind. I'm a Inuyasha/Kagome fan all the way. Hope to see more soon! Later and best wishes!
| Title: Great new chapter!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, there! It's me, Gallantmon of the Hazard! Sorry for taking awhile to review! I've been busy as of late! Anyway, I've read your fourth chapter! It might be short, but it is pretty good! Naraku has arrived and more danger comes to Duel Academy! And now, Sailor Leo's identity is revealed. What will happen next? Can't wait! Later and best wishes!
| Title: I like it!
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I totally enjoyed the first few chapters of your story. I hope you keep it up. I just have one question. How are you going to explain how Beryl is still alive if this takes place sometime during when the Outer Scouts show up? I look forward to your future stuff.
| Title: Good Chapter 3!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me, Gallantmon of the Hazard! I've read your chapter three and I think that it is pretty good. The 'Astral Scouts' and Sailor Moon's Scouts meet for the first time and I love the song number. Very original idea. Can't wait to see more! By the way, thank you for reviewing my 'Destiny Stars' and I'm glad that you thought it was good. Later and best wishes! PS: Did you look at my 'Darkness Moon' and 'Twilight Wars' stories yet?
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm Gallantmon of the Hazard! I'm a fanfiction writer and a fan of video games and anime, especially Sailor Moon, Digimon, Yu-Yu-Hakusho, Inuyasha, and both Yu-Gi-Oh series, R and GX. I've noticed your fanfiction and I've got to say that you are pretty good. I hope that you plan to continue your stories. Through you still need work on your spelling and grammar, but it is still quite good. By the way, did you get check out my stories. I've got several Yu-Gi-Oh GX and Sailor Moon stories. One of them, 'Sailor Moon GX: Destiny Stars', I've already completed. And the other two, 'Yu-Gi-Oh GX Stars: Darkness Moon' and 'Yu-Gi-Oh GX Digi-Stars: Twilight Wars', I'm still working with 'Twilight Wars' being my newest story. If you can, can you check them out? However, they are in the 'X' rated section, so, you need to be old enough to view that type of material to look at my stories. But if you can view my stories, do you mind to check them out? They are quite popular and well-known, but I'm open to plenty of new opinions. Later and best wishes!
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