| "Stickshifts and Safety Belts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: duosbabymama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where this is going. Can't wait til the next chapter! Sian
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 18:18 CST
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This is really getting interesting! I hope you continue. I loved Duo's impression of Wufei "Personally, I thought wearing white Hammer pants with a blue tank top after 1984 was opening yourself up to new forms of pain, but apparently this kid didn't agree." And Trowa as "the human equivalent of a Whippet" made me grin too. The erudite note passing scene was great too. And now I *really* want to know why Heero is going to court! I *definitely* hope you'll continue this soon! Thanks for writing! -sylenctone
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Reviewed By: cewo On: August 19, 2007 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I must say, I like this a lot! The slow development of romance between the protagonists is a good idea; so much better than them knowing each other for 5 minutes and falling madly in love! How about another chapter? Soon, please?!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 19, 2007 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got an excellent handle on Duo's character. While he has that bubbly silliness, he also knows words like "sycophant," (even if he can't spell 'em). And narcissism. (I occasionally try throwing a word like that into daily conversation just to see how many people get it! Heh.) The class notes were hilarious. Quatre's discomfort over the whole "being a Winner" thing was very believable. And the poke-able friend was just plain sweet. So, what's with the courthouse??? Not a "cliffhanger" per se, but you've got me curious. I want more!
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Reviewed By: Sassenach_Gaijin On: August 19, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always enjoy a good high school AU story. I'll be keeping my eyes pealed for more of your story. :)
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 18, 2007 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. I liked the "not since third grade" line...too funny. And the bit about not pissing off Barbie. This looks like it's gonna be a good story, so here's hoping you put up more soon!
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