| "Captivating Meeting" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 17:16 EDT
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u should add another chapter! maybe an epilogue with her reflecting how they met and maybe get inu's perspective on it. |
Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I would love to read more chapters too. The only mistake you made was in the middle you have Inuyasha saying Kagome's name even though he didn't know it yet. "Say it for me Kagome. Tell me what you want" Other than that, Awesome job!!! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: August 20, 2007 22:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
really interesting way to meet someone...lol anyway i think you should add more to it & make it a big story. :)
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!! i luved it. i was bored, i found it, read it, luved it and want you to write more chapters for it. PLEASE!!!! ^_~ -mikoofdoom p.s. keep. it. up!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 10:00 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha its like your going to be making more chapters.... well can you!?! PLEASE!?! that was great ^^
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 04:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
good dialogue, like really good dialogue. wow, i'm impressed. it was better, much better, than i thought it would be from the summary.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: serenity rose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you do more please???!!!!!!!
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Title: WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! BRAVO! MORE CHAPPIES! MORE CHAPPIES! THANX!
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