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| "Feeling Like a Fool" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Starshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yatta! I have finally managed to read this story from start to finish without interruption; and it was well worth the wait for the quiet time! I would dearly love to pinch Aya where it would hurt, how clueless does a man have to be? I've always had a soft spot for Youji, and now I really like him - though he needs to be pinched, too, just a little. As for Ken...awwww, the poor young man! Things surely have to get better for him at some point. As usual, a work well done. I'm looking forward to the rest of it!
| Reviewed By: luvsjazz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 13:48 CDT
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I read your previous works a while ago when I first got into Weiss Kreuz. You had stopped writing by then, so it's good to see one of the first authors I enjoyed writing again. You were actually one of the first ones that made me think of Ken as anything more than a supporting character. He has never really struck me as very interesting, or as 3 dimensional at all. Probably because my pairing preference is Aya/Yohji, I don't often read fiction with Ken in it as a main character. The couple of times I've tried, I had unfortunately found stories with Ken as a weepy doormat character - which just doesn't do much for me. I find myself intrigued, though by your current characterization of him. I always thought Kase had to have been an extreme bastard to not only frame his friend and kill his career, but then to literally try to kill him. Kase taking advantage of Ken as a minor, and 'training' him for his use is totally believable. At any rate, I'm finding Ken a very enjoyable main character in this story, and I'm looking forward to further updates. :) -Jazz
| Title: From Heaven to Hell....
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Aya somebody get the guy some decent yaoi anime or manga he really needs to get a clue. Geez Ken really doesn't need this. Another mission on the same night with his messed up bugnucks, the disappointment of the interruption and now Yohji on his back? Okay I so want to just really kick Aya where it hurts so that he won't even think about sex for a year. I'll be surprised if Ken lasts the night before crumbling. ~~Bows~~ You're Welcome! Your work is awesome and feeding the muses is more than worth the time especially for all the enjoyment I receive. Though I tell you Melpomene is ripping my heart out for poor Kenken. In some ways this is harder than waiting for him to wake up in CNR! I am eagerly awaiting the next book, but be assured I am patient because the anticipation just makes it that much better. ;p
| Title: Abyssinian's Need...
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Not trying to be too secretive about it is he? LOL Geez Aya lighten the hell up, Ken doesn't have to let you have him at all. I'm really wanting to smack Aya, past inhibitors taken into consideration, his behavior to Ken is still crappy. Sorry I know this is shorter than normal. I was totally distracted and torn between hoping Aya would get a clue and wanting to whack him with the side of his own Katana. I really hope in the future that he gets over himself enough to really apologize and appreciate Ken the way he deserves. Right now as much as I want to feel sorry for him I just can't. :-(
| Title: Mission Accomplished
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 22:57 CDT
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Ah so Omi is the bait with Yohji as his pimp. I had the impression that things had changed as far as who the pimp was going to be. Though I will admit Yohji will be able to play the part better unless Aya played the cruel dangerous kind. Okay... so who is playing that pimp? I'm sooooo confused. Though I think I recognize that outfit. Didn't Huggy Bear wear something that appalling along with about 10 pounds of gold chains and a wide brim hat on Starksy and Hutch? LOLOLOL Okay after thinking a bit I've come to the conclusion that the cars they came in actually didn't have a lot to do with who was seen together. Also that it may have been more indicative of the fact that Omi was still pissed off at Aya and so determined who road with who. Not that I'm real happy that Ken's stuck with Aya at the moment. Yohji's soooo hooked. LOL Yeah definitely not good, Aya's in a mood and unless Ken says no he's about to get hurt again isn't he? Yohji has reason to be worried and angry, but Ken's expecting it so hopefully it won't be too bad. But I'll tell you those two (Yohji and Aya) remind me of a pair of 4 point Elk fighting over a dominant female for their herds. Sorry Kenken. -_- Okay I can see how Aya ended up being so unskilled, even how he could be very conflicted since sex was obviously a dirty word in his house growing up. But I'm wondering how his mind came up with the conclusion that Ken was fair game or (sorry this is sad and bad) the team sex plaything, just because he heard him with Yohji. In fact to me that would have made him more off limits regardless of whether they had the appearance of a couple. I'm really looking forward to seeing more from both Yohji and Aya's points of views.
| Title: Worried Emerald Eyes...
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man poor Ken he's definitely having a Murphy's law night. You know refilling that wire in the watch is probably a pain in the ass. At least I always thought that most of the time he cut the wire or broke it after he used it. And yeah keeping the watch in good working order so no one ever questioned it would be a job too. I'm glad that Yohji is taking the time to check on Ken it shows he's more important than the nicotine cravings. I know that sounds like it would be no question, but hey real life we know how addicts can act, whatever their addiction. Yes! That's my Yohji and heck even if Ken doesn't admit that the tears come from more than just the onion I bet he likes the comfort. LOL Poor Yohji, Ken could have hugged him or something to show he was happy about all the concern. You know I can understand Ken's concern, especially since both of the older members of the team seem to have put him the 'bottom' role for their sexual encounters. I mean heck Aya didn't even hardly give him a choice, I'm sure Yohji was a tad single minded too that first night. Hmmm what's got Omi all upset? Leave it to Aya to be the one to do the upsetting though. Do his nails? Oops this has very very bad written all over it as it sounds like it's going to play right into the conversation Ken was just having with Yohji. No way will they be able to convince him that they think otherwise now. Okay Aya why won't you be bait.....? You've got the prettiest damn face in the place. Next to Yohji that is. ;p Wow real quick on the uptake there Aya... just about as smooth as Yohji and his comment. -_-;;; Hmmm I'm not sure why Aya couldn't take his katana, he seems to take it everywhere else, but I can understand how surprising it is that he allowed for a change in the plan he obviously came up with without a fight. His mind really is off, I certainly hope it's not off enough that he's negligent with Omi's safety.
| Title: The Praying Mantis Case....
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh spotted the warning right off the bat without looking, no one can say they weren't warned. Good job! You know it's true there were rarely any female criminals that Weiss was sent after. That alone in a fic would make it relatively unigue. Hmmm that would have been a difficult case for Yohji I suppose even with the woman being bad news. He wouldn't have been able to bring himself to take her down. Oh... yeah that would definitely not have worked for Yohji. Damn he has bad luck... or maybe he had very good luck when it came to her. Hmmm this mission seems to have gone to hell in a handbasket. I can't wait to find out why. Yes! That is my graceful and powerful J Leaguer! Thank you for that! ^_____^ Poor Ken sometimes Aya can take the follow my lead no matter what to new heights. I don't blame him for being confused since the team only rarely has a mission blow up this strangely. I see know why there was no opportunity for them to work off the adrenaline high that standing guard on the mission would have built up. Well at least Aya sort of gave him the choice it's obvious during that moment that he pulled back that if Ken had said no or pushed him away even aroused as they both were Aya would have stopped. Aya is very lucky that Ken is easy going, not too soft or wimpy, just understanding. Consensual or not I'd have probably kicked him where it hurt if he did me that way and then acted like nothing happened. But I'm interested in seeing things from Aya view point. So far we've been seeing Ken's view. Will we get chapters from the other two at some point? It's sad that Yohji and Aya are taking it for granted that Ken will always be willing. Chapters 3 and 4 of the last book make it pretty clear that his body is willing but his heart is dying. At least Yohji cares if Ken is satisfied but they better get their acts together or Ken may be hurt beyond repair. :-(
| Title: Sorrowful Thoughts While Cooking
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 20:11 CDT
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Sounds like maybe Kase isn't the only guy out there that Yohji and Aya may want to find at some point. Poor Ken has not had a lot of luck in love so far it appears. Geez so not only has Aya absconded with the largest apartment and bath.... but he's commandeered the dining room for his paperwork. LOL He and Crawford, though I bet he'd hate knowing he compared to the Schwarz leader. ;p LOL I bet they don't mind. Heck even Yohji isn't too old to be thought of as a college student. Sounds like they've got a nice bachlor pad basically. ^_^ Wow I'm surprised that Aya even let Ken do anything if they were still at the mission site. But that bites that he wasn't there waiting for Ken to finish things. I take it he suddenly had second thoughts or something? So that is what that anime is about. I've seen it listed but never took the time to look it up. Damn that Kase the more I read the more I wish they could bring him back and put him down again...really painfully.
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