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| "The Forgotten Tamer" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Chap 2
Reviewed By: Takato the Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe i should just let the fact that some of that isent realistic and just enjoy it? Because even though i doubt those encounters would go that way, i enjoy it xD And isent that the pont?
| Reviewed By: Takato the Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story idea so far (on the first chapter) but there are a few things that i must point out.. sorry... First off, the Tamers world happened in a different universe than Adventure. So saying both of them kind of messed me up... jumping in bed together naked was kind of quick. i mean, i'm gay too and i sleep naked, but if i was in that situation, that wouldent be that easy of a situation. The biggest thing ... "I'm not good at yaoi relationships..." Yaoi is only used to describe male love, but people in japan dont go around saying "I love our Yaoi relationship!" All that being said, your idea itself is awsome, and i will keep reading, and if you ever wanna be friends im here. I wont bite i promise!
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