| "The Sleeping Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I thought that chapter was great. This whole story is just amazing! Please please PLEASE update soon.
Also I would like to be part of bulma's family...(if you haven't already filled that up yet) My name is Vittoria (I will never use me REAL real name Cuz its ugly kk? + My friends evencall me this sometimes)
P.S I thought that the punishment for sedna was not a punishment at all cuz radditz in this story wasn't even in the least horrible. He was a real nice guy. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: April 04, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I look forward to updates. I wonder what Sedna is planning.
My name is Ilea. If you put me in your story make me the black sheep of the family. (I just like being evil. ^_______^) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U updated YYYAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! Lets teach that bich of Sedna that no one messes with Bulma Godamit!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRR!!! let me at herrrr! i want her death banishment is not good enough for the bich death is so much better but that is just me ! Oh well I love the fic cant wait for next chapy!
and hey before I forget when is the next lemon going to BBBBE!!
Later >:D |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O M G!! This is such a great story!! You need to continue! AGGHH!! I need to know how it turns out!**starts biting her long pointy nails** oh and by the way I also like the way you made vegeta OOC. He is so cute! Please contine this lovely little fairytale? I'm sure the whole world of readers want to know how this great story is going to turn out.
P.S. Nice lemon! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
What's going to happen now!? |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....I was a bit disappointed by the fact that there wasn't a catfight (heh, heh) but ... I'll get over it!! ^.~ I wonder what her revenge is gonna be ... |
Reviewed By: SAturn On: January 14, 2003 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rate it ten. The story was different and interesting. I wonder what will happen and I think it was really good. |
Reviewed By: SAturn On: January 14, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rate it ten. The story was different and interesting. I wonder what will happen and I think it was really good. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: December 31, 2002 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. i love vegeta (he's yours, don't worry. trunks is mine ;-)) and i'm happy that hes finally acting really romantic to bulma. please finnish! i must know what happens! thanks. |
Reviewed By: w@// 0f i//u$i0N On: December 16, 2002 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
pleeez hurry wit the next chap.!!! these ones were great! :) i luv it....but do hurry i wanna know wat happenes to that "slut" (sedna)....i hope she gets in the biggest trouble ever! lol!! well hurry soon!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This was great! Make that bitch suffer!!! >. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 22, 2002 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic! I like vegita being ooc it makes it more interesting
PLEASE make more chapters! |
Reviewed By: caged bird On: October 23, 2002 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol, she wakes up after forever, kisses him then falls back asleep? |
Reviewed By: majickdragonofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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This was very good. At first I expected another Sleeping Beayty story with just the names changed, and everything else the same. This took me by surprise. This was very enjoyable. |
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