| "The Sleeping Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I read some of it on AFF.net and am happy to see two extra chapters on this site. As for what to do with it I'd say end it because you've already brought closure to the princess. Nice job.
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Title: The Sleeping Princess"
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 26, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like this story...and please don't bring YAMCHA back i can't stand him...it's a fairytale so let it end that way.vegeta is ooc and he loves bulme give them kids and let them be happy.as much as i want it to continue with a twist i want them to be happy...maria
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 04, 2004 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEE!!!!! update soon!!!! i love it!!! a suggestion for a twist??? this is gonna be stupid and all, but have Lord Yamcha come back... when he returns, he tells everyone that he drank a potion that made his aging process slow down... i dont know tho... if u do use it, thank u... if u dont, ill know why... ^_^()
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PERFECT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short, but interesting. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Sleeping Princess
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jumps up and down* Oooo I can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: vejitawoman On: August 22, 2003 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH......
thank so much for putting me in your fic....
hehe i was one of the 1st ones mentioned, too ^_^
I cant wait to read more |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: August 20, 2003 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! What happens next! please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Ssjmatt709 On: August 11, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! What's goin to happen next? Please write more!!! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story i awesome. Very different. Hurry with your next update please!! |
Reviewed By: vejitawoman On: July 04, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor should be 100!!! I love this story!!!
I'm not used to vegeta being so sweet, but surprisingly, its great!!!
I love the plot!!
My real name is Terrie
can i please be one of bulma's family?? I want to either be 17 or older and have a hot husband, lol!! |
Reviewed By: Sonia On: August 07, 2003 09:39 CDT
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hehe... this is realy gud.. kind of ooc...but in a gud way.... i especially liked mating sedna w/ raditz.. that was brilliant...update soon..
if u can put me in my name is Sonia |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 13:34 CDT
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I don't know if I'm first 5 people, probably not, but the chapter was great! Sedna has more to finish, I'm sure of that. She and Radditz will have lots of kids! ^.^ But I can see Radditz blasting her!!! :) just in case...Brianna (Bria-chan) :P |
Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait for you to continue my name is jennifer |
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