| "Sasuke's Child" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: itachi-sama93 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 00:58 CDT
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ahhhhh!! That's a sweet ending!!! ^-^ Great job on the fic, love it!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!
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Title: oh
Reviewed By: Kurosuzu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 04:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh!!And sorry for my spelling, *hit self on head* You know me.I can't be trusted with a keybord*wacks self again* I really did love it Haku-chan!!(Had just relized how hurt ful comment was) I'm sorry!!For give me!!I was trying to be a good reviewer, no that I'm finally reading one of your storys and not just helping you write it!!(if you haven't figured out who's writing this that's just sad!!) Well I was just trying to be serious!!But you know that's not me cause I'm always kinding around!!Forgive me!!I've been a good girl,right?!!!*crys in room* Forgive me!!!!!*run in further conner*I'm so asamed of my self!!!!
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Title: Haku-chan
Reviewed By: Kurosuzu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got hand it to you, this story of your want me to read more Haku-chan. You made two spelling errors. But I forgot where but one of them you ment to say enemy but you said anm.Think. Your spelling has inproved, but to be safe frist put on micorsoft word to avoid future proble.I'll be right on the draw in a few. XD So keep up the go work but don't rush youself :)
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: The_Writer_Of_Crow. On: August 25, 2007 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a decent fic try less spaceing and a lil more detail.. please update soon
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Selexia-Lily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great job! I'm loving the story line, and Karasu is awesome!!! Keep up the awesome work! >
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Title: Awesome Fic !!!!
Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW!!! sasuke followed his son!!! It shows he cares!!! Please update really soon i can't wait!!!!LOL^_^
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY nice chappie update you are definatly getting better at the whole not spacing too much deal. Any way good job but you still need more details, don't worry you'll get better!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 20:36 CDT
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This story is ok but you need to stop having such big spaces between the paragraphs and make the chapters longer maybe put in more details! If you need help You can E-mail me.
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