| "InuYasha and new girl" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: LOvE InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The spelling and grammer is rediculous, you need to use 'our' instead of 'are'. That was something that bothered me. I think it could be such a cool fic if you just work on the grammer and stuff. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: rukiia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 18:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah yeah, I can update a new chapter. but pleas look at my new story '' Kagome's Diary '' I like this story.. :)
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 05:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok this story is ok but your grammar sucks(No flame intended), If you need some one too edit or something email me .Oh and could you please make the chappies a little longer? Otherwise Good Job!
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Reviewed By: *starfall* On: August 20, 2007 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! update soon,very soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh please update i can't wait to see what happens on their sleepover
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Reviewed By: hoppen On: August 20, 2007 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwww that was so cute.the next chapter will be comeing right.
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Reviewed By: rukiia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 08:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah, yeah. Hello everybody, this is my first story I have writing. but plz review and a new chapter will come out to u.
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