"Launch's Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: master yoshi On: June 05, 2010 06:41 CDT Comment/Review: ahh, that was fun. gohan can do better than videl anyway.
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Reviewed By: YOU ASS-HOLE! On: March 09, 2008 11:51 CDT Comment/Review: WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!??? Gohan would NOT ever fuck a girl besides Videl! You are going to delete this piece off Shit, lewis. That is it. I've had enough. I know people who could make you pay. Delete this and all your G/OC stories and I'll forgive you this once. Fail to comply and I wil make you suffer for your stupidity. I swear By God that I will.
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 06:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another enjoyable fic :) Looking foward to reading more...
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Reviewed By: Gohan the saiyan On: August 21, 2007 18:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: write anothee chapter this is the best fic i've read so far
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