"Siblings" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 23:18 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i liked the idea you had for this story, but i have to say that it felt like you rushed the ending a litle bit. i felt the same thing for mokushita hyuga. they were fantastic stories, but the endings just felt a little rushed. but anyways, i thought that this was a really interesting one-shot.
| Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 15:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fanfic!! Before I read this fic, I have been wondering if Deidara was related to Ino in some way because of their similarities. Even though, now I don´t really think that they are, this fic would give a good explanation of their relationship if it were true...(I don´t think I am making much sense... Y_Y)
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