Reviewed By: Rasuka - Chan On: July 16, 2008 18:11 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Lovely story =) I think you need to develop your characters a little more and show what kind of character is really within them.
Reviewed By:Maho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 09:38 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: It was nice to read a fanfiction not focused on the love relationships between the main characters. I hope you update soon, your character is interesting. ^_^
