Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 02:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. Like the twist, with K's memory. Of course, she HAS to remember IY, but what if it took a little longer than one chapter? Or if she did remember, and was reluctant to get close to him again? Angst is always good. At least in small doses! Anyways, I would love to read more, lots more, of this story. Your tone and pacing are good, draws you in without rushing. Write what the story shows you, no matter how short or long, and it will be enough. When it's done, I'd love to read more of your work.
|
