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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 23:11 CDT
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Hmmmm, why not leave it for now, if you don't have a firm, clear idea for more? Work on your next story, and if inspiration for this one comes up, you can always add to it. Like before, I'm good with it where it's at, but it's your story, and only you can tell it like it needs to be told. Don't stress over it, work on the next, and see what happens. It will all be good, I have no doubt!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 21:43 CDT
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although i kinda like a bit more closure i'm cool if you quit there. . . i'm interested in seeing what else you pull out of your imagination. . . once i find a gifted and talented author i usually try to find time to read and review (sometimes circumstances won't allow it but i make earnest effort) ~ thank you for the fun trip, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 04:19 CDT
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I think this is a fine ending. Not every fic has to have a mating/baby/pup/ever after epilogue. Some things are best left to the imagination. Not that I have a problem with lemons, mind! ;p Great job, your next will be just as wonderful.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 01:56 CDT
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this one reviewer may not be many but i'm cute. . . so is the ending of this story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 16:45 CDT
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ya would think she would remember someone she loves, wouldn't ya? . . .this is great! i don't have to read previous chapters over again to spark my memory of the story when you update this often! . . . yeah, good story too! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 13:28 CDT
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so the bad shape shifter youkai looked like yasha sealed her memories and knocked kirara unconscious. . . a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: animegeek4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 20:43 CDT
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Bad Kirara, spit that fur out! You don't know where it's been! You'd better hope that wasn't near a guys loincloth. It was? Oh dear. Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 03:12 CDT
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The plot thickens! Where the heck is IY? What's up with that? He's gonna have a fit if K remembers Koga first. Hehehe. Love the tension and questions brought up these last chapters. Good job.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 02:40 CDT
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short chapters could mean faster updates, if that's the case i don't mind. . . i wonder why kirara didn't just transform and curl up around kagome and keep her warm that way? . . . thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 21:17 CDT
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she ran away laughing, i would run away laughing... one hopes kirara gets help. good, quick updates!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 21:22 CDT
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Oh, you are too bad! But so funny, that it was the sit/osuwari that she remembered. Very fitting, though. Glad to hear you aren't giving up on this. More, more!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 20:15 CDT
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no she didn't just say that!! sweet story, nicely written. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 02:39 CDT
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Good story. Like the twist, with K's memory. Of course, she HAS to remember IY, but what if it took a little longer than one chapter? Or if she did remember, and was reluctant to get close to him again? Angst is always good. At least in small doses! Anyways, I would love to read more, lots more, of this story. Your tone and pacing are good, draws you in without rushing. Write what the story shows you, no matter how short or long, and it will be enough. When it's done, I'd love to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: cynsny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 00:49 CDT
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It is cute. Slightly different take on the story.
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Reviewed By: inufreak8910 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really liked and pleaze continue writing!
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