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| "People Lie" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: BlackColt8 On: January 29, 2008 23:19 CST
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Christ, I wish the fan fiction world had more writers like you. You took a frequently used idea and made it into a work of art. Naruto's character reminds me of a mix between the show Dexter and Griffith from Berserk, and the depth you've added to the ninja world is far beyond anything seen in Kishimoto's canon. The plot twists were all very original and well structured, hardly anyone breaks away from the "Wave Arc" mission, and I've never seen an original mission so well conceived. I am slightly confused that the story is labeled "complete", I hope that is a mistake or an indicator that the specific arc has finished. I plan of joining this site simply so that I can be alerted to your next update.
| Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story actually very interesting. Him using Hinata as a tool of all things... don't see this too often. Or ibiki either, not a lot of people like him, I suppose. Keep up the good work, I wish to see just what he wants Hinata to do. ps: ignore the 9. The story is really good, it's just my preferances.
| Title: Clients Lie 1
Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nugar! Man oh man! You captured Sasuke perfectly! I especially love how you applied Naruto's outlook to the missions. It fits in perfectly with his outlook on life. I especially like the interaction between Naruto & Hinata. It not only shows just how devoted to him she is but how he keeps her on the hook! I look forward to many more! ~Toby
| Reviewed By: The War General [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 23:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great please update soon.
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