| "Wonderland" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Hello fellow Alaskan!
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 05:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, I was going through the fanfics and D: OHMIGOSH! Another Alaskan homie :D Just a friendly "Hello!" and hot damn, good lemon there if I do say so myself. Your spelling and grammar is LOVELY... The camera scene with Sango cracks me up. >_> I know EXACTLY (and what I mean by exactly is "exactly") how Kagome feels. Ugh. Its sooo embarrassing. I could have died. So, in light of that, I'd like to say "Thank you" for posting something thats funny, sexy and something I can ah..relate to (-_- ohgod) Toodles and keep writing!
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Title: up date please!!!
Reviewed By: lady silverfox a.k.a. mychelle 79 On: October 24, 2007 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story please write more please!!!!!!!! miroku and sango next please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv it! lol so funny inuyasha tryin 2 hold it in him! very good story! ^^
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Reviewed By: fictionfan2342 On: September 03, 2007 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good start, keep it up
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved your story. Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 11:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. it was orginal. Just an Idea you might want to post what Miroku and Sango were doing during the same time frame. You could title it "Wonderland from another angle" or something like that. Ok byes. ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad ^^ I was stuck reading 'till the end, so you had my interest, but you were missing that special something that would have set this story apart from all the others. If this is one of your first fics, don't worry, you'll get comfortable soon and you'll develop your own style. Remember to read through it a few times to get those sneaky typos, and try to keep the characters in character, especially when you're writing cannon. I did like it, and you'll improve with practice. Sorry if i'm being harsh ^^;;;
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