| "a little love won't hurt you" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Would love to see Gai's reaction to that last bit. Like how Kagome's mum handled his loudness. Glad the rookies stood by him even if Sasuke and Sakura are idiots. Not a bad story.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 20:38 CST
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Gah!!!!!! Is it????? Could it be???? OH MY GOD IT IS IT IS AN UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sweet!!! do more. please :)
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:08 CST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Please update (and remember Kyuubi next time)soon I want to see what happens,and want to see the reactions to Kagome,and the fact that she's Gai's... (would it be neice or cousin?who cares)just please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: kayna4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update very soon. I just love this story so much.
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Reviewed By: kayna4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 20:51 CDT
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I just loved reading about your story "a little love won't hurt you" and wanted to tell you I can't wait for the next chapters and I give my full attention on this story.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 20:48 CDT
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I really love this,and want to read more!Please update soon,and I can predict something good,and or funny is going to happen in the next chapter,so please get it up soon.Oh and I hate sakura,and want her to suffer a bit,and maybe KO Sasuke every now,and then.NO ONE TREATS NARUTO LIKE THAT,AND LIVES!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 12:37 CDT
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no how could you!!!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 20:09 CDT
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CURSE THE EVIL CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update please.
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 14:45 CDT
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You should totally finish this story. it sounds really inteesting and I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting sotry you have here. I myself LOVE naruto/Inuyasha x-overs lol espically Naru/Kag. :) you have a very good out line so far. I like the detail of your story and your progression, tho you did have a few wording mistakes, but no biggie :) IF you feel you'd like to have a beta msg me and let me know. I'll be happy to assist you if i can. Also one EXTREAMLY good Naruto/Inuyasha x-over is "when the sky mourns" the BEST ever, but sadly is unfinished -___-. well i hope your writting goes well and your muse doesn't leave you ^_^ JA!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:58 CDT
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why wont you update boo hoo!!!! ..... Okay Im done now
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 14:57 CDT
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I dont know what to say except that it is good I hope you dont give up and update soon
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 18:14 CDT
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I dont want the Naruto team to be kids that's all I really care about
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