| "a little love won't hurt you" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vampire_Bride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: What's a plot?
Reviewed By: Nelle22 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what is a plot? i'm just doing this because it's fun! but if the commentary between the paragraphs are annoying, i'll tune it down. eh but since school is killing me, i'll try to update this as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 12:04 CST
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I like your comments, even though it is a bit difficult to distinguish between the story and your comments. You made me laugh, so it's all good. When are you going to get Kagome fighting? And Souta was AMAZING! I'm get excited now! Anyway, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 22:40 CST
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thanks for the updates! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. However I have found that your little commentaries in the middle of the chapters are highly distracting. Making it very hard for me to keep tabs on the plot.
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 20:12 CST
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I enjoy your writing. Please keep on updating. Votes: Kun-Loon/Teuchi (They fit pretty well in my opinion.) Gai/Anko (It would be so interesting!) Kakashi/Iruka
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Title: i can do this?
Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kun-Loon/Teuchi (Ayame's Dad) Jaraiya/OC-Iyari (to see her look on my Profile) Gai/Anko (by god I'll make it work!) Kakashi/Iruka (it works they belong together.) Most of my pairings are on a whim, but I'll stick to them, it'll be interesting. Anko would be keeping Gai in line and Teuchi could lower the price Naruto, Shippo, and Kagome will no doubt be paying if they continue to eat ramen (as if naruto and shippo will stop) I really like the story thus far and I can't wait til the next chapter, til then, ja!
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 15:43 CDT
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Sasodei.....itakisa....kakuhidan...kakairu and please alot of skankura bashing
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 07:51 CST
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snort that was funny but make sasukekun not be such a bastrd i dont think that sentence made much sense
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 05:19 CST
Comment/Review:
awsomeness!!!!!!! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:32 CST
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gah somebody smack somes sense into sasuke but sukura can stay the same for all i care
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 21:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job! love the story...
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 11:19 CST
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Awesome things are definitely getting interesting, look forward to another update.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 02:34 CST
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Update update update update update update! Please update soon I want to see what Kagome does to Sasuke. Normally I like Sasuke,but I only hate him when the story calls for it, so update so I can read Sasuke's fate. Aslo I about 70% of the time hate Sakura, but who can blame me I don't like how she treats Naru-Kun(or Chan sometimes) So update soon.
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sweatdrops* whats with the dance????
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 18:02 CST
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interesting...lol and very funny. Hopefully you shall continue?
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