Reviewed By: this is it Oo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, love the story. lol! this site is very weird, I´m used to fanfiction.com, not this. it´s queer. lol! ok, so...basically, what is this about? she hates Jake, and she wants to do it with Edward so he can read her mind?... right? anyway, very well written. a bit confusing, but that's probably cuz I didn't read the summary...and there's only two stories...lol! well, I still loved it, so great job! ^_^ ♥ Ami
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