| "Rock the Cradle of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: hazard2self On: December 20, 2007 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! Poor Iruka. Sex on a shower floor and battle wounds considered, I'm impressed he's moving so quickly. I laughed when Iruka first showed up and disturbed Raidou. Couldn't help myself. I really liked Raidou's general attitude in this one.
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahaha kinkifically. Lordy I love you and your sex scenes. They make me so happy. And lovely surprise of Rai going down on Iruka. I love a riding uke. You can keep writing these 3 ^^. Though I still love kashiru. but these 3 are definately hot hot hot.
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Reviewed By: Vesca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loves you.. and I loves Raidou and I loves Iruka... and I loves showers and hot smexy ninjas in showers and my mind is just wonderign over what exactly Raidou was planning on doing that evening if Iruka hadn't shown up and... and... *dies*
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