Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's wonderful. I want to read the next chapter! You might want to run spellcheck or something, there are some odd breaks at random places...words that get cut off at the end. The story itself is fantastic though. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is so perfect! Bulma, along with her ex-boyfriend and future husband, all of them trying to get along and not kill each other. It's such a perfect plot, I wish I'd thought of it myself. :)
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