| "Turned Tables" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooh! His fantsay, even I would have liked for it to be fulfileld! Oh well! When's the lemon. :) |
Reviewed By: Ms2ryAngle7 On: July 04, 2002 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You deserved all 10's because honestly desever them. Finaly there is a story that has some sexaul issues that do not present themselves in the beginging of the story. That way you give your story a meaning and not just sex.
I hope you continue to let the readers wait. That way you have something to look forward to.
P.S If the readers are so hard up for a lemon, tell them to go rent a pornflick. (: |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 07:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! What happens after they kiss? HHHMMMMMM? |
Reviewed By: lone fighter On: July 03, 2002 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it rocks i never thought of a plot line loike that plz write more thanks |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 07:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chapter was great! What happens next? Will Vegeta get Bulma in the sack!? DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 24, 2002 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is totally wicked! bulma sounds as visious as vegeta himself! maybe worse! (maybe...) yikes!
i love this story! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 04:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great!
please add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 |
