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| "Why Did Fate Bring Us Together?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ayame-san786 On: November 02, 2007 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good writing but the story itself was kinda bad...Neji is really out of character and you skipped out on too much. eg. you should have elaborated on their battle. It made me think that you were just quickly jotting some random thaughts down.
| Title: A little strange
Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this story was a little strange but I think it was good. Good Job.
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