"Leave a Message after the Ki Blast" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: animeluver11 On: June 14, 2012 20:08 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: the fanfic is so funny and i also had an idea for another chapter! how about you use Yamcha in one i think that would be funny. | Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 10:19 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow, this fanfic is HILARIOUS!!!!!! i was cracking up the whole time, and i also thought the images of Vegeta and Bra were cute ^_^! especially the one of her curled up next to him on the couch, and pulling the cat out of his hair ^_^! if i have any ideas, I'll leave them in another review, kay ^_~? ~Vegeta's Mate and Lover for Life, Veggie_Luva_101
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