| "Twisted Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: I luv Gohan 4ever
Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry forgot to ask you to e-mail me when u update! anyways...e-mail me at andi@coakle-barker.com
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Title: I luv Gohan 4ever
Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT I LOVED THE STORY AND THE PAIRING AND USUALLY DON'T LIKE SERENA/TRUNKS PAIRING! NOW THAT THE PAST IS CHANGED WOULDN'T THE DBZ CHARACTERS AND SM CHARACTERS STILL BE ALIVE? I HOPE SO CAUSE I WANT THEM TO COME BACK INTO THE STORY. HOPE YOU GET PART 2 OUT REALLY SOON!...OR ELSE...~EVIL GRIN~ AGAIN LUVED UR STORY!
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was woderful now..............UPDATE NOW! WAIT IS SHE DEAD DREAMING WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE MORE PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: anime angel1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shiva On: August 01, 2003 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue this story fast!
I'm so excited!! |
Reviewed By: Niki-Chan On: July 23, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good!!!! Please write more, soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoOoOoOOoOOoOO Fluff!!! Lovely!! 'Trunksielins?! Mucho Embareesment!!Funny, though. :)
Hey, though, I must impose on you to watch paragraph form. It's messes up the story's great flow. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:27 CDT
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Mmmm...interesting. I think the 'love' was pushedway too fast, but ur the fic writer, and the characters do what you want them to do, and I would definately suggest following the paragraph rules. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! Trunks-chan!!! It's too bad I'm not Sailor Moon, I'd stalk Trunks...hehe...:P |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:13 CDT
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Hey, I love UsaxTrunks, even in english. Please watch paragraph structure. Peace. |
Reviewed By: sailorrachel84 On: October 20, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your fic is great! Although itv was sad that the senshi all died. Hotaru's was the most goreish. if you can't tell already, I,M A HUGE HOTARU/SATURN FAN! *smillle* but i'm not to mad she had to die. Iin fact, i'm impressed that you though up a Serena/Trunks fic. Most peps pair it Trunks/Hotaru. As 4 the rating, i think the fic is EXCELENT!!! PLEASE WRIT MORE! ASAP! THE SUSPENCE IS REALLY GETTING TO ME. |
Reviewed By: Lyra Silvertongue On: October 11, 2002 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
great!!! glad that you updated!!! email me again!!! thanks a bunch!! ja for now |
Reviewed By: Lyra Silvertongue On: October 09, 2002 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you've done a wonderful job with this and I'm glad that you didn't give up on it. Can you please email me at cute_duckie44@hotmail.com when the next chapter is up beause i want to know when more of this wonderful story is written. thats all for now, ja. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw yeah! Darien got his ass kicked, finally! Serena's showing her girl power. lol Keep it up! I love it already! |
Reviewed By: TL On: August 09, 2002 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD! WRITE MORE!!! This is one of the best I read. |
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