| "When Life Hands You Lemons..." Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, couldn't stop laughing, id love to know more details about yamcha the barbies and tweezer?, very funny
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Title: niiice.
Reviewed By: Free-sprit, not logged in, to lazy On: June 21, 2005 06:33 CDT
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Wauw, I must say, that this was extremely weird, and it didn't make any sense, and the story doens't have a point, and... I loved it! I looove it! I just love, said that, these stories, this is the second stories of yours I've read, so I better go now, 'casue I've got something to do. Love it. Keep it up. :)
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 23:24 CST
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*snickers* Delightful nonsense. Think I shall look up more of your stuff. Thanks for the laugh, I needed it!
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Reviewed By: wresslelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
maybe this fic shouldn't be NC17, but I think this should be at least PG13, at least. i liked how it was straight out and to the point, but im one of those people who try to avoid sexual content.
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Reviewed By: BlueDietyx29 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! My ribs hurt from laughing so much....PLEASE keep up the good work....I think I shall read this again ;) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: November 19, 2002 13:04 CST
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Rae, that was really cute. It was clever and entertaining, and parodies are not easy to write without sounding silly. I really enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! I read this at work and damn near fell out of my chair for laughing so hard. And got a lot of weird looks from my coworkers, but oh well. Please, you have to write more of these! |
Reviewed By: Casey On: November 19, 2002 07:01 CST
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LOL...that was great, and very blunt...*grin* keep up the fanfics |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Never have I read a better V/B parody. Brilliant work!! |
Reviewed By: Murasaki Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over laughing wildly* Oh man, that was hilarious! More to come perhaps? *wags tail, looking hopeful* |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Dear, dear Ilyana...
Perhaps you should get into the habit of only reviewing stories you have read IN THEIR ENTIRETY. And maybe check your facts before shooting your mouth off, idiot.
It's called a parody, you lackwit. Making fun of your beloved lemons, perhaps?
Is that enough sarcasm, or do I have to spell it all out for you?
Friggin' moron... |
Reviewed By: Ilyana On: November 18, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This should NOT be labelled as an NC-17 and who cares if you're an inexperienced non-sexpert you could have at least TRIED. the body was all right, the yamucha bashing bar-b-q was funny but the end totally sucked ass. sorry but the not even half assed lemon really killed the mood.
and okay i admit i skipped half of your story and only read the middle and end, so don't take this review too personally |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you rock! i laughed through this entire fic! your ignorance in the to-do's of sex, whether feigned or real, was the funniest part! bravo to your originality |
Reviewed By: caged bird On: September 15, 2002 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, that was very funny. there should be more fanfic authors like you.
and by the way, be it a town of 8,000 or a college town of 45,000 the guy selection doesn't really differ. trust me on this.
:) |
Reviewed By: Kay_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 18:19 CDT
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XD lmao! |
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