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| "In the day of Chance “Tbone” Furlong" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ahorse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey way to go for being the 1st swat cat author on mmorg! Keep at it;it's not just fun for you (*wink*)!!
| Title: Needs Major Work
Reviewed By: Clumsy Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so they IC (in character) but umm...it'd be better if it wasn't in that format. Maybe if you had some setences and some punctuation, and some more literary talent...it wouldn't be so bad. It needs a lot of work, it kinda has merit and I'm not trying to flame you (I love SWAT Kats!), but this is doing it a great disservice and dishonor. -shudder- Sorry, but this does need work. Loved the boxer stealing part though. ^^
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