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| "Winter's Reminiscence" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Amet On: October 11, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for update!!! its the end? well, the endin was really sad, coz they go separate way, but little pain was taken away when i knew Youji said Ran, I pray for them to have met and been together too, Oh how I wish~ really great fic!
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully done. While worried that Yohji might pine for the one beautiful that might never be repeated, and for the guilt I think you are right that he would feel, I was even more concerned for the pain the encounter would leave with Aya. Instead you helped show how the encounter might have been liberating for Aya in a way that might not have been possible if Yohji had all his memories restored. The lemon was as delicious and appropriate as the Bartender's drinks. Equally delightful if a bit of a surprise was the note of hope on which you ended the story.
| Reviewed By: ravnwing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful and evokative story that captures the tragedy of Yohji and Aya so well. A very enjoyable read that had me sniffling at the end.
| Title: remem. u ^ ^
Reviewed By: Amet On: September 15, 2007 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i remem u as i'd read ur fics be4 n i think i'm still waitin for its update as in where aya is clubdancer, i just love ur fic n loved this too, pls do continue! this fic had quite a different feel to it as u stated in A/N, sorrie but i didnt see the Bartender coz i was in a hurry to read the fic, Love YoujixAya XD, this fic name reminded me of Winter Cincada (did i spell that correctly?) n plot too with somewhat like flashback n all. i'm wonderin how this fic's goin 2 end. a 1-night-stand is too painful, how;s aya feelin? T.T
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Sad, but in a wistful way. Yohji and Aya will both have at least one good memory.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful beginning. Poetic tone, but also you've captured the ideal feeling (warm, safe, relaxed or relaxing, contemplative, possibly nostalgic) of being in a bar and sharing a story. The drink chosen sounds perfect. I can't help but wonder what Aya was thinking and feeling when he ran into Yohji (I assume we won't be able to know fully given the storyteller's perspective, and that is fine). I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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