| "Goodbye to you" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha luver !234567891011121314151617181920 On: February 13, 2009 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZ please finish your fanfic!!!!!!!! its awsome!!!!!!! i luv it!!!!!!!! please please please please PLEASE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! my fav pairings are these, if you want an opinion.... InuXKag SessXRin SAngoXMiroku KikyoXHell NarakuXHell and I mean hell as in the flaming place you go when you die!! :)
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Title: lovely
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:34 CST
Comment/Review:
um i want shippo/rin my favorite pairing thats right i said it screw kohaku om kag/inu mir/sang and im not sure if u started the new story if u havent i want a assassin story o and i love this story so far
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Reviewed By: RCGM3tal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done there, but I do have to say that there are quite a few errors in the story, and would just like to point it out. you're mixing up "well", with "will" miasma, not my asthma "Iron Reaver Soul Stealer", odd spelling but thats what it is, from subs on anime You said "...minus well..." when it should have been might as well. and normally, Miroku says "I sense a demonic,(sometimes dark) aura near....." Oh and every time that you have speech it should be on a new line, so that way you can see who is speaking, and don't forget to add the "said ..." Sorry, I like pointing out grammar mistakes, but overall this was most enjoyable to read
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... what are the secrets everyone seems to be hiding... did miroku find sango... hope kagome figures out the truths soon... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i WANT Inu/Kag!!! NONE OF INU/KIK PLEASE!!! JUST DONT T-T lol and ooo i LOVE IT!! depressing moments ey?? i WOULD love to read them soon!! and for your next story... make it a assassin story!!! XD im adding you to my favs so i dont miss a thing ^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... good thing the well opened and inuyasha & kagome are able to go through the well... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome is back in the feudal era... hope inuyasha & kagome get together... hope they find sango... hope they defeat naraku... and kikyo rests in peace... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angleofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 21:49 CDT
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sango and sess! didnt see that one coming lol! so are they together? who will inu choose if it was between the two? ahh so many questions!
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Reviewed By: angleofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is good i cant wait for you to update
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh sounds like a great story please update soon! ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... what happened to everyone... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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